EDNC The Slums - Discussion Thread

Well, that took a while.

Wasn't feeling too hot for a while, so writing didn't go as smoothly as it could have.

Not like I was sick or anything, just not 100%. It messes with the writing vibe, you know?

But who cares about me anyway?

Hello? (echoes all spooky like through vast and seemingly abandoned thread).

...is it possible to be a lackey for this rebel mob? I was considering your idea on gifted children but a child would not be picked for being a soldier/tracker (also noticed we arn't expanding out of city yet.) so i thought a rebel would be the easiest way for me to get my hands on a knife and some machine oil splatters.

Won't be a commander just be a lackey if Debs decided to be Queen of the rebels I'm just getting a half approval before i start botching a character sheet together for a rebel Grunt

I believe that would work.

I personally, have not been able to come up with anything to expand the story of my character which is why I stalled out. Kind of having a tough time envisioning the world and so I am not sure where to go.

Sometimes you're writing away and things seem to be making sense and then suddenly someone shuts the lights off and your like, 'Hey? WTF am I?' I have to go back and review everything and find the cliff that I fell off of.

Sometimes you write a cliffhanger... Sometimes it lacks the hanging part...

I guess?

I'm not sure...

At least there's more to scroll through now.

Yaaaaaay.